Lovers
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I Like Love
I do not Like Lovers
I would Like a Love
I would not Like a Lover
I feel Love is when you Like
I feel Lies are when you Love
The best way to kill is Love
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I feel Love is when you Like
I feel Lies are when you Love
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I Love Lies
I do not Love Liars
I would Love a Lie
I would not Love a Liar
The best way to kill is Lie
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If you truly love, don't
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Stud just wrote this for his English homework tonight. WTF? I'm totally torn between being damn proud of this deep poem, and feeling like I want to burst into tears because of the dark feelings he has about love. The best way to kill is Love. I mean, seriously, WTF?!
4 comments:
Wow. That is truly an amazing poem... how old is he again?? I really enjoyed reading that poem and it also made me pasue and think over it... which is a phenomal indicator that the poet is an excellent writer...
It would probably bother me if one of my children wrote it too tho...
Either way, he sounds wise beyond his years... even if he himself doesn't understand the poem... it's good.
I'de give him a kiss and show him how much you love him ;)
wow... how many spelling errors were ther in my last comment... so sorry, didn't proof read!
wow, what deep thoughts...
yeah, i agree wiff ME... give him a big hug and tell him when he finds love it doesnt have to turn out like yours, meaning divorce... and tell him you love him!
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My son used to write really dark poetry in hs. He's 27 now and fine. Probably nothing to worry about.
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